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Abbreviations
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A = autograph
(i.e. Mahler) C = copyist
F = full (orchestral) score |
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V =
piano-vocal score |
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h = high voice
m = medium voice
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Colour coding
reading from CF5m
adopted in revision to ACV5m
CV5m
has unique reading in vocal part
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AV5h
(F-Pgm)
[17–21 August 1901] |
ACV5m
(A-Wn)
[1905?] |
AF5h
(US-NYpm)
[1901–1902/3],
ACF5h
(A-Wn) [1902–3],
CF5m
(A-Wn)
[1905] |
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Top
of page 1 |
nach Es-dur transponiere (A) |
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1 |
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Sehr langsam und zurück haltend |
Sehr langsam und zurückhaltend |
AF5h/CF5m: Aüsserst langsam und züruckhaltend
Interesting that this inconsistency was not
resolved |
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2–3 |
P |
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long l.h. slur omitted |
error |
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3 |
P |
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tie to b. 4 omitted |
error |
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11 |
P |
Stets mit zartestem, verhaltenen Ton |
As AV5h but deleted in pencil and replaced
with Ruhevoll (non-A) |
AF5h, ACF5h and CF5m:
Ruhevoll |
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12 |
V |
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short < added in pencil below stave |
not in AF5h, ACF5h or CF5m |
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13 |
V |
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short > added in pencil below stave |
not in AF5h, ACF5h or CF5m |
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14 |
r.h. |
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slurs deleted in pencil and new single slur
from b. 13 added |
editorial? |
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15 |
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Revised in pencil and ink |
a) Orig. version copied and subsequently
revised in red and lead pencil (A?)
b) Zögernd added in pencil (non-A) |
a) same sequence in AF5h, ACF5h;
rev. version
only in CF5m
b) AF5h, ACF5h and CF5m: Zögernd |
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16 |
V |
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wavy line above vocal part (=rubato?
non-A= singer?) but see b. 34 |
not in AF5h, ACF5h or CFhm |
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18 |
V |
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a tempo / pp added in pencil
(non-A) |
not in AF5h, ACF5h or
CF5m (what was the
source?) PFh1/PFhm: a tempo is at b. 17 (pp absent) |
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19 |
Text |
no comma |
comma added in pencil (non-A?) |
no comma in AF5h, ACF5h;
CF5m has comma |
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22 |
P |
a Tempo |
as AVh; pencil rev. to tempo |
original in AF5h, ACF5h;
rev. version in CF5m |
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24 |
V |
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pp added in pencil (non-A) |
not in AF5h, CF5m |
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25 |
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pp added and then deleted in pencil
(non-A) |
not in AF5h, CF5m |
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26 |
V |
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p added in red pencil on 3rd quaver
(=A?) |
not in AF5h, ACF5h, CF5m |
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28 |
V |
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Etwas fliessender, aber nicht eilen
added in pencil (non-A) |
From AF5h, CF5m |
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28–29 |
V |
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<> added above stave in pencil (non-A?) |
not in AF5h, CF5m;
not deleted in pencil |
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30 |
P |
? |
c ''
in pencil overwrites b '?
(probably non-A) |
editorial |
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33 |
P |
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p added in pencil |
In both AF5h and CF5m |
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34 |
V |
< > |
< > erased with wavy line in pencil (c.f. b.
16) |
not in AF5h, CF5m;
so revision restores CF5m reading |
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35 |
V |
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< added above stave in pencil |
not in AF5h, CF5m; |
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36 |
V |
pp |
overwritten p in blue pencil (A?) |
no dynamic in AF5h or CF5m |
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37 |
V |
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Nicht schleppen! added in pencil above
the stave (non-A) |
From AF5h, CF5m; |
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38 |
V |
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< added in pencil |
In both AF5h and CF5m (though
rather shorter) |
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39 |
V |
no dynamics or accent, but note value =
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accent and
 added in pencil
note value changed in pencil from
to
and rest |
AF5h and CF5m: accent; note value =
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40 |
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zurückhaltend |
Wieder added in pencil (non-A) |
From AF5h, CF5m; |
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42 |
P |
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corrects
transposition error in pencil |
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43 |
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Wieder sehr langsam |
Deleted in pencil and replaced by Tempo I |
From AF5h, CF5m; |
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v |
(pp) |
as in AF5h |
no dynamic in AF5h or CF5m |
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45 |
V |
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pp added; and deleted in pencil (by an
editor?) |
not in AF5h, CF5m |
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48 |
Text |
! |
! omitted |
uncorrected error |
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51 |
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Nicht schleppen |
deleted in pencil |
not in AF5h, CF5m |
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Text |
meinem |
miscopied as einem and deleted and
replaced with meinem in red pencil |
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52 |
Text |
! In |
deleted and replaced with , in in
pencil |
From AF5h, CF5m; |
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53 |
Text |
Leben |
comma added in pencil |
From AF5h, CF5m; |
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55 |
Text |
In |
revised to in in pencil |
From AF5h, CF5m; |
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V |
pp |
pp |
No dynamic in AF5h; (pp) in CF5m |
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56 |
Text |
Lieben |
comma added in pencil |
! in AF5h and CF5m |
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58 |
P |
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chords corrected in pencil (A?) |
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Text |
und |
und revised to in in pencil |
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59 |
V |
semibreve |
revised to
and rest in blue pencil |
From AF5h, CF5m; |
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Text |
Lied! |
Full point (uncorrected copying error) |
Lied! in AF5h, CF5m |
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P |
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pp added in pencil (A?) |
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60 |
P |
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AF5h, CF5m: verklärt! [this revision
NOT transferred to CV5] |
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62 |
P |
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slur d' to d'' deleted in pencil |
n.b. no glissando in AF5h or
CF5m |
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62–3 |
P |
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morendo added in pencil |
Not in AF5h or CF5m |
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slur d' to f'' not deleted |
slur e'
to g'' not deleted |
AF5h, CF5m: glissando e to
g'' |
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