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				| Title
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				|  | None |  
				| Date |  
				|  | Undated [13–29 June 1894] |  
				| Calligraphy |  
				|  | Black ink, with pencil deletion |  
				| Paper |  
				|  | Unruled, no maker's 
				mark, upright format, 345 x 210 |  
				| Manuscript structure and collation |  
				|  | 2 fol.: |  
				|  | [1r] = draft text for the finale, six stanzas |  
				|  | [1v–2r] = blank |  
				|  | [2v] = inscription from Fritz Löhr to Bruno Walter: 
					
						
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							Bruno Walter / übergab ich dies alte, 
							zur Zeit / der Entstehung des Werkes für / mich 
							beschriebene Blatt / in tiefer herzlicher 
							Dankbarkeit / aus meinem Besitz / zu Neujahr 1912 / 
							Friedrich Löhr | 
				To Bruno Walter I present this old sheet from my 
				collection, written out for me at the time of the creation of 
				the work, with deeply heart-felt thanks, at New Year 1912, 
				Friedrich Löhr.  |  |  
				| Provenance |  
				|  | Ex coll. Fritz Löhr, who presented the draft to Bruno Walter on 
				1 January 1912. Offered for sale at by J.A. Stargardt on 23/24 
				November 1971, lot 721. |  
				| Facsimiles |  
				|  | Complete colour facsimile: 
				
				US-NYp [1r]:
				
				GMS2Fac, 49;
				
				GKMRC, 24; 
					
				
				NKGII.2, 194 |  
				| Select Bibliography |  
				|  | HLG1F, 1027–29;
				
				GMS2Fac, 62;
				
				GKMRC;
				
				NKGII.2, [189]–195 |  
				| Notes |  
				|  | The dating of this draft 
				relative to
				
				AL2 
				is uncertain and contrary views have been taken by Edward R. 
				Reilly (ERBH, 
				62) and, apparently, the editors
					
				of
				
				NKGII. Reilly believed that AL3 
				to be the earlier of the two documents, chiefly 
				because of the absence of the crucial lines: 
				O 
				Schmerz! Du Alldurchdringer! 
				Dir bin ich entrungen! 
				O 
				Tod, du Allbezwinger!  
				Nun bist du bezwungen! These are present in 
				AL2 
				and the text as set, so their omission is perplexing if AL3 
				post-dates
				AL2. In a footnote (ERBH, 
				61, fn. 14), Reilly also suggested that 'it is most interesting 
				that a thematic link that one finds between the song and the 
				finale in just that passage that was added by Mahler to his text 
				[i.e. in 
				AL2]', which, were it the case, might 
				also offer 
				some slight support for J.B. Foerster's report that the decision 
				to include Urlicht in the Symphony was a late one, made 
				only after the work's finale had been completed. But one might 
				respond that the reference to the music of Urlicht 
				(b.660ff) is a setting 
				not of the four 'missing' lines absent from AF3, 
				but text that is present, albeit in variant forms, in both
				AL2 and AL3: 
				[Mit 
				Flügeln, die ich mir errungen]
				In 
				heissem Liebesstreben
				werd' ich 
				entschweben
				zum 
				Licht, zu dem kein Aug' gedrungen! 
				On the wider issue of the chronological ordering of the libretto 
				drafts, some observations can be offered in support of 
				the alternative ordering of the drafts adopted here and in 
				
				NKGII:
				•
				AL2 retains a closer connection with the Mahler's original source of 
				inspiration, by ending with a return to the opening stanza by 
				Klopstock; AL3 drops this idea and instead 
				uses stanza VI of
				AL2 as the 
				concluding text, the solution adopted in the text as set. 
				• The assignment in AL3 of the third 
				stanza to the alto (rather than the soprano, as in
				AL2) was adopted in the final setting. 
				• AL3 adopts revisions made in
				AL2 
				(e.g. stanza IV, line 2) 
				• 
				S5.6 
				adopts revisions made in AL3 
				(e.g. stanza III, line 2) 
				None of these observations is decisive, and because of the 
				unavailability of most of Mahler's composition draft [SS5] and 
				the entire orchestral draft [OD5] the issue of the chronology of these text drafts 
				cannot be finally resolved. |  
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